I am posting chapter 2 today so that you can get a feel for a bit more of the story and then I will publish these on Sunday mornings until the novel is published.
Very intriguing and nice writing! You mentioned, maybe in your first post on "The White" that you were worried about repetition. Not sure if you meant this, but check the bit about cooking in the 2nd last paragraph, and the same idea expressed in slightly different language 2 paragraphs above that.
Very intriguing and nice writing! You mentioned, maybe in your first post on "The White" that you were worried about repetition. Not sure if you meant this, but check the bit about cooking in the 2nd last paragraph, and the same idea expressed in slightly different language 2 paragraphs above that.
Thank you, I appreciate it. My notes are scattered, as if I’m a terrible editor. It means a lot to have a close reade!